My plan for revising my paper is going to be to hand it in to my mentor and let her revise it. On the last meeting I had with her, she told me that if I needed help on my paper or any editing that she would be more than happy to help. I believe that my essay is at a good stance, but it might need a tad bit revising on the nights that I stayed up late to work on it. A sleepy mind is never good when working on papers, so I think getting help from someone with a college degree is a great idea.